http://www.sidelanes.com/change-the-music-a-weird-short-story/ takin' it eazy Mon, 06 Sep 2010 21:22:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.sidelanes.com/change-the-music-a-weird-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-5117 Desturney Thu, 18 Feb 2010 18:19:39 +0000 http://www.sidelanes.com/?p=145#comment-5117 Ha. that was pretty silly. I loved the voice. Like I saw it all in my brain. It was cool. Ha. that was pretty silly. I loved the voice. Like I saw it all in my brain. It was cool.

]]> http://www.sidelanes.com/change-the-music-a-weird-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-4956 Billie Tue, 02 Feb 2010 00:04:39 +0000 http://www.sidelanes.com/?p=145#comment-4956 this is very amuzing! if you like that strange factor, then use things that are not human or/in unnatural circumstances. it was a bit to realistic. also, extend your adjective use. as a writer, adj are what makes you absorb into the story. keep writing! you have a talent for it!! this is very amuzing! if you like that strange factor, then use things that are not human or/in unnatural circumstances. it was a bit to realistic. also, extend your adjective use. as a writer, adj are what makes you absorb into the story. keep writing! you have a talent for it!!

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